Dan, I've noticed some issues in your typeset part of this piece, namely misspellings of the Italian "più" and several collisions between elements. Would you be receptive to some of these issues and willing to fix them? If not, I'd be glad to do so if you could provide me with the Finale source file. Thanks for your typeset work on this piece! Daphnis 17:31, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
Fixed. 18 September, 2011
